{"id":107,"date":"2018-08-29T11:10:52","date_gmt":"2018-08-29T15:10:52","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/6-1-1-email-address\/"},"modified":"2023-12-19T21:02:51","modified_gmt":"2023-12-20T02:02:51","slug":"6-1-1-email-address","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/6-1-1-email-address\/","title":{"raw":"6.1: Emailing","rendered":"6.1: Emailing"},"content":{"raw":"<div class=\"textbox learning-objectives\">\r\n<h3>Learning Objectives<\/h3>\r\n1. Identify characteristics of effective professional emails.\r\n\r\n2. Plan, write, revise, and edit short documents and messages that are organized, complete, and tailored to specific audiences.\r\n<ol type=\"i\">\r\n \t<li>Format and write documents and messages such as emails.<\/li>\r\n<\/ol>\r\n<\/div>\r\nElectronic mail, widely known as \u201ce-mail\u201d or just \u201cemail,\u201d is by volume the most popular written communication channel in the history of human civilization. With emails being so cheap and easy to send on desktop and laptop computers, as well as on mobile phones and tablets, a staggering 280<em> billion<\/em> emails are sent globally per <em>day<\/em> <a href=\"https:\/\/www.radicati.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/01\/Email-Statistics-Report-2017-2021-Executive-Summary.pdf\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">(Radicati, 2017)<\/a>\u2014that\u2019s over a hundred trillion per year. Most are for business purposes because email is such a flexible channel ideal for anything from short, routine information shares, requests, and responses the length of a text, to important formal messages delivering the content that letters and memos used to handle. Its ability to send a message to one person or as many people as you have addresses for, integrate with calendars for scheduling meetings and events, send document attachments, and send automatic replies makes it the most versatile communication channel in the workplace.\r\n\r\nThis mindboggling quantity of 3.2 million emails sent per second doesn\u2019t necessarily mean that quality is a non-issue for email, however. Because it has, to some extent, replaced mailed letters for formal correspondence, emails related to important occasions such as applying for and maintaining employment must be impeccably well written. Your email represents you in your physical absence, as well as the company you work for if that\u2019s the case, so it must be both\u00a0<em>good<\/em>\u00a0(well-written) and appropriate.\r\n\r\nFirst, ensure that you really need an email to represent you because emailing merely to avoid speaking in person or calling by phone can do more harm than good (see <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/2-3-selecting-appropriate-channels\/\">\u00a72.3<\/a>, especially <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/2-3-selecting-appropriate-channels#t23\/\">Table 2.3<\/a>, above on \u00a0channel selection). If an email is necessary, however, then it must be <em>good<\/em>. As people who make decisions about your livelihood, the employers and clients you email can be highly judgmental about the quality of your writing. To them it's an indication of your professionalism, attention to detail, education, and even intelligence. The writing quality in a single important email can be the difference between getting hired and getting fired or remaining unemployed.\r\n\r\nLet\u2019s say, for instance, that you get an email from a customer and they mention in it that they\u2019ve been shopping around for a company to do a custom job for them. This means they\u2019re emailing other companies with the same inquiry. Let\u2019s say also that your competitors offer similar services at similar prices and are similarly reviewed positively online. Tough choice for the customer. With everything else being equal, the quality of the email responses may be the deciding factor. Responding to the customer quickly gives you an advantage because you show them that you can get things done promptly. If your email is also well written in a professional style (see <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/4-5-standard-business-style#452\/\">\u00a74.5.2<\/a> above for the 6 Cs) and error-free in every way due to effective editing and proofreading (see <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/part\/chapter-5-the-writing-process-4-editing\/\">Ch. 5<\/a> above), you stand a much better chance of getting the job.\r\n\r\nComparing this with another company\u2019s email that came a few days later with multiple writing errors in it, the customer will likely go with the company that wrote the better email. Even though the quality of communication doesn\u2019t necessarily guarantee quality of work in the product or service a company provides, customers will assume a connection. Indeed, the quality of communication can certainly say volumes about work ethic and attention to detail.\r\n\r\nThe customer\u2019s basis for judgment here is that if a company\u2019s communications are good, it must be because they\u2019ve hired a customer service rep dedicated to responding to people. This means they have the money to do so, which means they\u2019re successful, which must be because they do a good job, which means they\u2019ll do a good job on what the customer wants them to do. We must all try to make a similarly strong impression in any situation where the quality of email matters. Let\u2019s turn our attention, then, to the ten aspects you must take care of when sending an important email in the order they appear in the email from top to bottom.\r\n<h2><a id=\"menu\"><\/a>Email Parts<\/h2>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li><a href=\"#611\">6.1.1: Email Address<\/a><\/li>\r\n \t<li><a href=\"#612\">6.1.2: Timestamp &amp; Punctuality<\/a><\/li>\r\n \t<li><a href=\"#613\">6.1.3: Subject Line Title<\/a><\/li>\r\n \t<li><a href=\"#614\">6.1.4: Opening Salutation &amp; Recipient Selection<\/a><\/li>\r\n \t<li><a href=\"#615\">6.1.5: Message Opening<\/a><\/li>\r\n \t<li><a href=\"#616\">6.1.6: Message Body<\/a><\/li>\r\n \t<li><a href=\"#617\">6.1.7: Message Closing<\/a><\/li>\r\n \t<li><a href=\"#618\">6.1.8: Closing Salutation<\/a><\/li>\r\n \t<li><a href=\"#619\">6.1.9: E-signature<\/a><\/li>\r\n \t<li><a href=\"#610\">6.1.10: Attachments<\/a><\/li>\r\n \t<li><a href=\"#6111\">6.1.11: Before Sending your Email<\/a><\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\nBefore delving into this detail, however, let\u2019s review the advantages, disadvantages, and occasions for using email given earlier in <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/2-3-selecting-appropriate-channelst23\/\">Table 2.3<\/a> on channel selection.\r\n<h3 id=\"email\">Table 2.3 Excerpt: Email Pros, Cons, and Proper Use<\/h3>\r\n<table style=\"width: 100%;border-collapse: collapse\" border=\"1\">\r\n<tbody>\r\n<tr>\r\n<th style=\"width: 25%\">Advantages<\/th>\r\n<th style=\"width: 25%\">Disadvantages<\/th>\r\n<th style=\"width: 25%\">Expectations<\/th>\r\n<th style=\"width: 25%\">Appropriate Use<\/th>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td style=\"width: 25%;vertical-align: top\">\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>Delivers messages instantly anywhere in the world to anyone with an internet connection and email address you have<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Sends to one or many people at once, including secondary audiences CC\u2019d or BCC\u2019d<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Allows you to attach documents up to several megabytes in size or links to any internet webpages<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Allows for a back-and-forth thread on the topic in the subject line<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Archives written correspondence for review even decades later<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Can be done on any mobile device with an internet connection<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Is free (beyond your subscription fees to an internet or phone provider)<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Is somewhat permanent in that emails exist somewhere on a server even if deleted by both sender and receiver<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 25%;vertical-align: top\">\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>Gives the illusion of privacy: your messages can be forwarded to anyone, monitored by your company or an outside security agency, retrieved with a warrant, or hacked even if both you and receiver delete them<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Can be slow when used for back-and-forth dialogue<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Tone may be misread (e.g., jokes misunderstood) due to the absence of nonverbal cues<\/li>\r\n \t<li>May be sent automatically to the recipient\u2019s spam folder or otherwise overlooked or deleted without being read given the volume of emails some people get in a day<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Subject to errors such as hitting \u201csend\u201d prematurely or replying to all when only the sender should be replied to<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Subject to limits on document attachment size<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Subject to spam (unsolicited emails)<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Regretted emails can\u2019t be taken back or edited<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Requires a working internet connection on a computing device, which isn\u2019t available everywhere in the world<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 25%;vertical-align: top\">\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>Reply within 24 hours, or sooner if company policy requires it<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Follow conventions for writing a clear subject line; salutation; message opening, body, and closing; closing salutation, and e-signature<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Netiquette: be as kind as you should be in person; don\u2019t write emails angrily<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Edit to ensure coverage of the subject indicated in the subject line with no more or less information than the recipient needs to do their job<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Proofread to ensure correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling because errors compromise your credibility<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Avoid confusion due to vagueness that requires that the recipient respond asking for clarification<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 25%;vertical-align: top\">\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>Quickly deliver a message that doesn\u2019t need an immediate response<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Send a message and receive a response in writing as evidence for future review (lay down a paper trail)<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Use when confidentiality isn\u2019t necessary<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Send electronic documents as attachments<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Send the same message to several people at once, including perhaps people whose email address you need to hide from the others (using BCC) to respect their confidentiality<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<\/tbody>\r\n<\/table>\r\n<h1><a id=\"611\"><\/a>6.1.1: Email Address<\/h1>\r\nJust as with physical \u201csnail mail\u201d you pick out of your Canada Post mailbox, the first thing you see when an email arrives in your inbox is who it\u2019s from. The address determines immediately how you feel about that email\u2014whether excited, uninterested, curious, angry, hopeful, scared, or just obliged to read it. Your email address will create similar impressions on those you email depending on your relationship to them. It\u2019s therefore important that you send from the right email address.\r\n\r\nIf you work for a company, obviously you must use your company email address for company business. Customers expect it. Bear in mind that in a legal and right-to-privacy sense, you don\u2019t own these emails. If they exist on a company server, company administrators can read any of them if they are investigating a breach of company policy or criminal activity <a href=\"https:\/\/www.priv.gc.ca\/en\/opc-actions-and-decisions\/investigations\/investigations-into-businesses\/2009\/pipeda-2009-019\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">(Office of the Privacy Commissioner of Canada, 2010)<\/a>. This means that you must be careful not to write anything in an email that could compromise your employability.\r\n\r\nIf you\u2019re writing on your own behalf for any business or job-application purposes, it\u2019s vital that you have a respectable-looking email address. Using a college or university email is a good bet because it proves that you indeed are attending or attended a post-secondary institution when you\u2019ve made that claim in your application. If your school email address has expired, however, it\u2019s worth starting an account that has a straightforward address showing your name. If your name is Justin Trudeau, for instance, your ideal email address would simply be justin.trudeau@ with one of the major email providers like Gmail or Outlook\/Hotmail. Of course, everybody knows that all of the straightforward firstname.lastname@ addresses have been taken, so there\u2019s nothing wrong with variations that include middle names or initials and small numbers as long as they don\u2019t get too big, such as more than 25 characters.\r\n\r\nWhat\u2019s fundamentally important, however, is that you retire your teenage joke email address. If you have one of these, it may have scored some points with friends back in high school, but now that you\u2019re an adult, it will only do irreparable harm to your employability prospects if you\u2019re using it for job applications. Any potential employer or other professional who gets an email from pornstar6969baby@whatever.com, speedball.playa@hotmail.com, or crazy.unicorn.girl@yahoo.com is going to delete it without even opening it.\r\n\r\nAlso, forget about clinging to the fantasy of having only one email address to deal with. Just as your demeanour and language style changes in social, family, and professional contexts, you must likewise hold multiple email accounts\u2014one for work, one for school, and one for personal matters. Each of the 3.8 billion email users in the world has an average of 1.7 email accounts <a href=\"https:\/\/www.radicati.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/01\/Email-Statistics-Report-2017-2021-Executive-Summary.pdf\">(Radicati, 2017)<\/a>. It\u2019s likely that you will have more than three throughout your life and retire accounts as you move on from school and various workplaces. If you can manage it, you can set up forwarding so that you can run multiple accounts out of one, except where company or institutional policy requires that you work entirely within a designated email provider or client.\r\n\r\n<a href=\"#menu\">Return to the Email Parts menu<\/a>\r\n<h1><a id=\"612\"><\/a>6.1.2: Timestamp &amp; Punctuality<\/h1>\r\nThe timestamp that comes with each email means that punctuality matters and raises the question of what the expectations are for acceptable lag time between you receiving an email and returning an expected response. Of course, you can reply as soon as possible as you would when texting and have a back-and-forth recorded in a thread. What if you need more time, however?\r\n\r\nThough common wisdom used to be that the business standard is to reply within 24 hours, the availability of email on the smartphones that almost everyone carries in their pockets has reduced that expectation to a few hours. Recent research shows that half of email responses in business environments in fact comes within two hours <a href=\"https:\/\/www.fastcompany.com\/3058066\/what-is-an-appropriate-response-time-to-email\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">(Vanderkam, 2016)<\/a>. Some businesses have internal policies that demand even quicker responses because business moves fast. If you can get someone\u2019s business sooner than the competition because you reply sooner, then of course you\u2019re going to make every effort to reply right away. Of course, the actual work you do can get in the way of email, but you must prioritize incoming work in order to stay in business. After all, the early bird gets the worm.\r\n\r\nWhat if you can\u2019t reply within the expected number of hours? The courteous course of action is to reply as soon as possible with a brief message saying that you\u2019ll be turning your attention to this matter as soon as you can. You don\u2019t have to go into detail about what\u2019s delaying you unless it\u2019s relevant to the topic at hand, but courtesy requires that you at least give a timeline for a fuller response and stick to it.\r\n\r\n<a href=\"#menu\">Return to the Email Parts menu<\/a>\r\n<h1><a id=\"613\"><\/a>6.1.3: Subject Line Title<\/h1>\r\nThe next most important piece of information you see when scanning your inbox is the email\u2019s subject line. The busy professional who receives dozens of emails each day prioritizes their workload and response efforts based largely on the content of the subject lines appearing in their inbox. Because it acts as a title for the email, the subject line should accurately summarize its topic in 3-7 words.\r\n\r\nThe goldilocks wordcount range here is important because your subject line shouldn\u2019t be so vague that its one or two words will be misleading, nor so long and detailed that its eight-plus words will be cut off by your inbox layout. Though it must be specific to the email topic, details about specific times and places, for instance, should really be in the message itself rather than in the subject line (see Table 6.1.3 below). Also, avoid using words in your subject line that might make your email look like spam. A subject line such as <em>Hello<\/em> or <em>That thing we talked about<\/em> might appear to be a hook to get you to open an email that contains a malware virus. This may prompt the recipient to delete it to be on the safe side, or their email provider may automatically send it to the junkmail box, which people rarely check. It will be as good as gone, in any case.\r\n<h2>Table 6.1.3: Subject Line Length<\/h2>\r\n<table style=\"width: 100%;border-collapse: collapse\" border=\"1\">\r\n<tbody>\r\n<tr>\r\n<th style=\"width: 33.33%\">Too Short<\/th>\r\n<th style=\"width: 33.33%\">Just Right<\/th>\r\n<th style=\"width: 33.33%\">Too Long and Detailed<\/th>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\">Problem<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\">Problem with your product order<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\">Problem with your order for an LG washer and dryer submitted on April 29 at 11:31pm<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\">Meeting<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\">Rescheduling Nov. 6 meeting<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\">Rescheduling our 3pm November 6 meeting for 11am November 8<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\">Parking Permits<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\">Summer parking permit pickup<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\">When to pick up your summer parking permits from security<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<\/tbody>\r\n<\/table>\r\nStylistically, notice that appropriately sized subject lines typically abbreviate where they can and avoid articles (<em>the, a, an)<\/em>, capitalization beyond the first word (except for proper nouns; see <a href=\"#\">Table 5.5.1<\/a>), and excessive adjectives.\r\n\r\nWhatever you do, don\u2019t leave your subject line blank! Even if you\u2019re just firing off a quick email to send an attachment to yourself and have no other words besides, the subject line text will be essential to your ability to retrieve that file down the road. Say you find yourself desperately needing that file months or even years later because the laptop it was saved on was stolen or damaged beyond repair, which you couldn\u2019t have predicted at the time you sent it. A search in your email provider for words matching those you used in the subject line will quickly narrow down the email in question. Without words in the subject line or message, however, you\u2019ll have no choice but to guess at when you sent the email and waste time going through page after page of sent-folder messages looking for it. A few seconds spent writing a good subject line can potentially save hours of frustrating searches.\r\n\r\n<a href=\"#menu\">Return to the Email Parts menu<\/a>\r\n<h1><a id=\"614\"><\/a>6.1.4: Opening Salutation &amp; Recipient Selection<\/h1>\r\nWhen a reader opens your email, its opening salutation indicates not only who the message is for but also its level of formality. As you can see in Table 6.1.4 below, opening with <em>Dear [Full Name]<\/em> or Greetings,<em> [Full Name]:<\/em> strikes an appropriately respectful tone when writing to someone for the first time in a professional context. When greeting someone you\u2019ve emailed before, <em>Hello, [First name]:<\/em> maintains a semiformal tone. When you\u2019re more casually addressing a familiar colleague, a simple <em>Hi [First name],<\/em> is just fine.\r\n<h2>Table 6.1.4: Opening Salutation Examples<\/h2>\r\n<table style=\"width: 100%;border-collapse: collapse\" border=\"1\">\r\n<tbody>\r\n<tr>\r\n<th style=\"width: 33.33%\">First-time Formality<\/th>\r\n<th style=\"width: 33.33%\">Ongoing Semiformal<\/th>\r\n<th style=\"width: 33.33%\">Informal<\/th>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\">Dear Ms. Melody Nelson:\r\n<em>Dear Ms. Nelson:\r\nGreetings, Ms. Melody Nelson:\r\nGreetings, Ms. Nelson:<\/em><\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\"><em>Hello, Melody:\r\nHello again, Melody:\r\nThanks, Melody.<\/em> (in response to something given)<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\"><em>Hi Mel,\r\nHey Mel,\r\nMel,<\/em><\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<\/tbody>\r\n<\/table>\r\nNotice that the punctuation includes a comma after the greeting word and a colon after their name for formal and semiformal occasions following <a href=\"#\">Comma Rule 2.1<\/a> and <a href=\"#\">Colon Rule 1.2<\/a>. Informal greetings, however, relax these rules by omitting the comma after the greeting word and replacing the colon with a comma. Don\u2019t play it both ways with two commas; <em>Hi, Jeremy,<\/em> appears too crowded with them.\r\n\r\nDepending on the nature of the message, you can use alternative greeting possibilities. If you\u2019re thanking someone for information they\u2019ve sent you, you can do so right away in the greeting; e.g., <em>Many thanks for the contact list, Maggie<\/em>. When your email exchange turns into a back-and-forth thread involving several emails, it\u2019s customary to drop the salutation altogether and treat each message as if it were a text message even in formal situations.\r\n\r\nFormality also dictates whether you use the recipient\u2019s first name or full name in your salutation. If you\u2019re writing to someone you know well or responding to an email where the sender signed off at the bottom using their first name, they\u2019ve given you the green light to address them by their first name in your response. If you\u2019re addressing someone formally for the first time, however, you may want to strike an appropriately respectful tone by using their full name. If you\u2019re addressing a group, a simple <em>Hello, all: or Hello, team:<\/em> will do.\r\n\r\nBe careful when selecting recipients, however. First, spell their name correctly because email addresses often have non-standard combinations of name fragments and numbers; any typos will result in the server bouncing your email back to you as being unsent. Waiting before entering their name in the recipient or \u201cTo\u201d field is also wise in case you accidentally hit the Send button before you\u2019re finished drafting your email. If you prematurely send an email, a quick follow-up apologizing for the confusion and the completed message is the best damage control you can do, but it requires immediate action. Another preventative measure is to compose a message offline, such as in an MS Word or simple Notepad document devoid of formatting, then copy and paste it into the email field when you\u2019re ready to send.\r\n\r\nIf you have a primary recipient in mind but want others to see it, you can include them in the CC (carbon copy) line. (If confidentiality requires that recipients shouldn\u2019t see one another\u2019s addresses, BCC [blind carbon copy] them instead.) Be selective with whom you CC, however. Yes, it\u2019s good to keep your manager in the loop, but you may want to do this only at the beginning and the end of a project\u2019s email \u201cpaper\u201d trail. They will appreciate that things are under way and wrapping up but may get annoyed if their inbox is flooded with every little mundane back-and-forth throughout the process. If in doubt, speak with your manager about their preferences for being CC\u2019d.\r\n\r\nNever \u201creply all\u201d so that everyone included in the \u201cTo\u201d line and CC\u2019d sees your reply unless your response includes information that everyone absolutely must see. If your manager sends some information to all 80 people in your department, for instance, your reply-all response that just acknowledges receipt with an \u201cOK, thanks!\u201d which is unnecessary in the first place, will anger 79 people who expected to see valuable information. If the first email was about a departmental meeting time though the location was yet to be determined, but you now have that information because you did the booking, of course you would reply all to provide that necessary follow-up.\r\n\r\nBear in mind that, concerning <strong>email security<\/strong>, no matter who you select as the primary or secondary (CC\u2019d) recipients of your email, always assume that it may be forwarded on to other people, including those you might not want to see it. Just because you\u2019ve selected recipients doesn\u2019t necessarily make your email a private channel. You have no control over whether the recipients forward it on to others, what the server administrators do with it (legally or not), or if your account or the server is hacked. If your email contains any legally sensitive content, it can even be retrieved from the server storing it with a warrant from law enforcement. A good rule of thumb is to <strong>never send an email that you would be embarrassed by if it were read by your boss, your family, or a jury<\/strong>. No technical barriers prevent it from falling into their hands.\r\n\r\n<a href=\"#menu\">Return to the Email Parts menu<\/a>\r\n<h1><a id=\"615\"><\/a>6.1.5: Message Opening<\/h1>\r\nMost emails will be direct-approach messages where you get right to the point in the opening sentence immediately below the opening salutation. As we saw in <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/4-1-choosing-an-organizational-pattern#411\/\">\u00a74.1.1<\/a> above on message organization, the <strong>direct-approach<\/strong> pattern does the reader a favour by not burying the main point under a pile of contextual background. If you send a busy professional on a treasure hunt for your main point, a request for information for example, don\u2019t blame them if they don\u2019t find it and don\u2019t provide the information you asked for. They might have given up before they got there or missed it when skimming, as busy people tend to do. By stating in the opening exactly what you want the recipient to do, however, you increase your chances of achieving that goal.<b><\/b>\r\n<h2><a id=\"t615\"><\/a>Table 6.1.5: Direct- vs. Indirect-approach Email Openings<\/h2>\r\n<table style=\"width: 100%;border-collapse: collapse\" border=\"1\">\r\n<tbody>\r\n<tr>\r\n<th style=\"width: 50%\">Sample Direct Opening<\/th>\r\n<th style=\"width: 50%\">Sample Indirect Opening<\/th>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td style=\"width: 50%\">We have reviewed your application and are pleased to offer you the position of retail sales manager at the East 32nd and 4th Street location of Swansong Clothing.<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 50%\">Thank you very much for your application to the retail sales manager position at the East 32nd and 4th Street location of Swansong Clothing. Though we received a large volume of high-quality applications for this position, we were impressed by your experience and qualifications.<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<\/tbody>\r\n<\/table>\r\n<strong>Indirect-approach<\/strong> emails should be rare and only sent in extenuating circumstances. Using email to deliver bad news or address a sensitive topic can be seen as a cowardly way of avoiding difficult situations that should be dealt with in person or, if the people involved are too far distant, at least by phone (see <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/2-3-selecting-appropriate-channels#t23\/\">Table 2.3<\/a> and Figure 2.3 on channel selection). Other circumstances that might force you to use the indirect approach for emails include the following:\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>Needing to use persuasive techniques<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Having no other means of contacting the recipient<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Needing to get the email exchange in writing in case the situation escalates and must be handled as evidence by higher authorities<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Needing to deliver a large number of bad-news messages without having the time or resources to individually customize each, such as when you are sending rejection notices to job applicants (see the sample indirect opening in <a href=\"#t615\">Table 6.1.5<\/a> above); out of expedience, it\u2019s understandable if these are boiler-plate responses<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\nIn such cases, the indirect approach means that the opening should use buffer strategies to ease the recipient into the bad news or set the proper context for discussing the sensitive topic (see <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/4-1-choosing-an-organizational-pattern#412\/\">\u00a74.1.2<\/a> for more on the indirect approach).\r\n\r\nOtherwise, your email must pass the <strong>first-screen test<\/strong>, which is that everything the recipient needs to see is visible in the opening without forcing them to scroll further down for it. Before pressing the Send button, put yourself in your reader\u2019s shoes and consider whether your message passes the first-screen test. If not, and if you have no good reason to take the indirect approach, then re-organize your email message by moving (copying, cutting, and pasting, or ctrl. + C, ctrl. + X, ctrl. + v) its main point up to make it the opening of your message.\r\n\r\n<a href=\"#menu\">Return to the Email Parts menu<\/a>\r\n<h1><a id=\"616\"><\/a>6.1.6: Message Body<\/h1>\r\nEmails long enough to divide into paragraphs follow the three-part message organization (outlined in <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/4-1-choosing-an-organizational-pattern\/\">\u00a74.1<\/a>) where the message body supports the opening main point with explanatory details such as background information justifying an information request. With brevity being so important in emails, keeping the message body concise, with no more information than the recipient needs to do their job, is extremely important to the message\u2019s success. The message body therefore doesn\u2019t need proper three-part paragraphs (see <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/4-4-forming-effective-paragraphs#441\/\">\u00a74.4.1<\/a> above). In fact, one-sentence paragraphs (single spaced with a line of space between each) and bullet-point lists (see <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/4-6-effective-document-design#465\/\">\u00a74.6.5<\/a>) are fine. If your message grows in length beyond the first screen, document design features such as bold headings help direct readers to the information they need (see <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/4-6-effective-document-design#462\/\">\u00a74.6.2<\/a>). If your message gets any larger, moving it into an attached document is better than writing several screens of large paragraphs. Unlike novels, people don\u2019t enjoy reading emails per se.\r\n\r\nAlso keep email messages brief by sticking to one topic per email. If you have a second topic you must cover with the same recipient(s), sending a separate email about it can potentially save you time if you need to retrieve that topic content later. If the subject line doesn\u2019t describe the topic you\u2019re looking for because it was a second or third topic you added after the one summarized in the subject line, finding that hidden message content will probably involve opening several emails. A subject line must perfectly summarize all of an email\u2019s contents to be useful for archiving and retrieval, so sticking to one topic per email will ensure both brevity and archive retrieval efficiency.\r\n\r\n<a href=\"#menu\">Return to the Email Parts menu<\/a>\r\n<h1><a id=\"617\"><\/a>6.1.7: Message Closing<\/h1>\r\nAn email closing usually includes <strong>action information<\/strong> such as direction on what to do with the information in the message above and deadlines for action and response. If your email message requests that its nine recipients each fill out a linked <a href=\"https:\/\/doodle.com\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Doodle.com<\/a> survey to determine a good meeting time, for instance, you would end by saying, <em>Please fill out the Doodle survey by 4pm Friday, May 18<\/em>. If the message doesn\u2019t call for action details, some closing thought (e.g., <em>I\u2019m happy to help. Please drop me a line if you have any questions<\/em>) ends it without giving the impression of being rudely abrupt. Goodwill statements, such as <em>Thanks again for your feedback on our customer service<\/em>, are necessary especially in emails involving gratitude.\r\n\r\n<a href=\"#menu\">Return to the Email Parts menu<\/a>\r\n<h1><a id=\"618\"><\/a>6.1.8: Closing Salutation<\/h1>\r\nA courteous closing to an email involves a combination of a pleasant sign-off word or phrase and your first name. As with the opening salutation, closing salutation possibilities depend on the nature of the message and where you want to position it on the formality spectrum, as shown in Table 6.1.8 below.\r\n<h2><a id=\"t618\"><\/a>Table 6.1.8: Closing Salutation Examples<\/h2>\r\n<table style=\"width: 100%;border-collapse: collapse\" border=\"1\">\r\n<tbody>\r\n<tr>\r\n<th style=\"width: 33.33%\">Formal<\/th>\r\n<th style=\"width: 33.33%\">Semiformal<\/th>\r\n<th style=\"width: 33.33%\">Informal<\/th>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\"><em>Best wishes,\r\nKind regards,\r\nMuch appreciated,\r\nSincerely,\r\nWarm regards,<\/em><\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\"><em>Best,\r\nGet better soon,\r\nGood luck,\r\nTake care,\r\nMany thanks,<\/em><\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\"><em>All good things,\r\nBe well,\r\nBye for now,\r\nCheers,\r\nCiao,<\/em><\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<\/tbody>\r\n<\/table>\r\nYour first email to someone in a professional context should end with a more formal closing salutation. Later emails to the same person can use the appropriate semiformal closing salutation for the occasion. If you\u2019re on friendly, familiar terms with the person but still want to include email formalities, an informal closing salutation can bring a smile to their face. Notice in Table 6.1.8 that you capitalize only the first word in the closing salutation and add a comma at the end.\r\n\r\nIncluding your first name after the closing salutation ends in a friendly way as if to say, \u201cLet\u2019s be on a first-name basis\u201d if you weren\u2019t already, greenlighting your recipient to address you by your first name in their reply. In your physical absence, your name at the end is also a way of saying, like politicians chiming in at the end of campaign ads, \u201cI\u2019m [name] and I approve this message.\u201d It\u2019s a stamp of authorship. Omitting it gives the impression of being abrupt and too busy or important to stop for even a second of formal niceties.\r\n\r\n<a href=\"#menu\">Return to the Email Parts menu<\/a>\r\n<h1><a id=\"619\"><\/a>6.1.9: E-signature<\/h1>\r\nNot to be confused with an electronic version of your handwritten signature, the e-signature that automatically appears at the very bottom of your email is like the business card you would hand to someone when networking. Every professional should have one. Like a business card, the e-signature includes all relevant contact information. At the very least, the e-signature should include the details given in Table 6.1.9 below.\r\n<h2><a id=\"t619\"><\/a>Table 6.1.9: E-signature Part<\/h2>\r\n<table style=\"width: 100%;border-collapse: collapse\" border=\"1\">\r\n<tbody>\r\n<tr>\r\n<th style=\"width: 50%\">E-signature Parts<\/th>\r\n<th style=\"width: 50%\">Examples<\/th>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td style=\"width: 50%\">Full Name, Professional Role\r\nCompany Name\r\nCompany address\r\nPhone Number(s)\r\nCompany website, Email address<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 50%\"><strong>Jessica Day<\/strong>, Graphic Designer\r\nUXB Designs\r\n492 Atwater Street\r\nToronto, ON \u00a0M4M 2H4\r\n416-555-2297 (c)\r\n<a href=\"#\">uxb.com<\/a> |<a href=\"mailto:jessica.day@uxb.com\"> jessica.day@uxb.com<\/a><\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td style=\"width: 50%\">Full Name, Credentials\r\nProfessional Role\r\nCompany Name\r\nCompany Address\r\nPhone Number(s)\r\nCompany website, email address<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 50%\"><strong>Winston Schmidt<\/strong>, MBA\r\nSenior Marketing Consultant\r\nTectonic Global Solutions Inc.\r\n7819 Cambie Street, Vancouver, BC \u00a0V5K 1A4\r\n604.555.2388 (w) | 604.555.9375 (c)\r\n<a href=\"#\">tectonicglobal.com<\/a> | <a href=\"mailto:m.bennington@tgs.com\">m.bennington@tgs.com<\/a><\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<\/tbody>\r\n<\/table>\r\nDepending on the individual\u2019s situation, variations on the e-signature include putting your educational credentials after your name (e.g., MBA) on the same line and professional role on the second line, especially if it\u2019s a long one, and the company address on one line or two. Also, those working for a company usually include the company logo to the left of their e-signature. Some instead (or additionally) add their profile picture, especially if they work independently, though this isn\u2019t always advisable because it may open you to biased reactions. Other professionals add links to their social media profiles such as LinkedIn and the company\u2019s Facebook and Twitter pages. For some ideas on what your e-signature could look like, simply image-search \u201cemail e-signature\u201d in your internet browser\u2019s search engine.\r\n\r\nIf you haven\u2019t already, set up your e-signature in your email provider\u2019s settings or options page. In Gmail, for instance, click on the settings cog icon at the top right, select <em>Settings<\/em> from the dropdown menu, scroll down the <em>General<\/em> tab, and type your e-signature in the Signature field. Make absolutely sure that all of the details are correct and words spelled correctly. You don\u2019t want someone to point out that you\u2019ve spelled your professional role incorrectly after months of it appearing in hundreds of emails.\r\n\r\n<a href=\"#menu\">Return to the Email Parts menu<\/a>\r\n<h1><a id=\"6110\"><\/a>6.1.10: Attachments<\/h1>\r\nEmail\u2019s ability to help you send and receive documents makes it an indispensable tool for any business. Bear in mind a few best practices when attaching documents:\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li>Always <strong>announce an attachment<\/strong> in an email message with a very brief description of its contents. For instance, <em>Please find attached the minutes from today\u2019s departmental meeting<\/em> might be all you write between the opening and closing salutations.<\/li>\r\n \t<li><strong>Never leave a message blank<\/strong> when attaching a document in an email to someone else. Your message should at least be like the one given above. Of course, including a message is up to you if you\u2019re sending yourself an attachment as an alternative to using a dedicated cloud storage service like Google Drive or Microsoft OneDrive. Even if it\u2019s just for yourself, however, at least including a subject line identifying the nature of the attachment will make locating the file easier months or even years later.<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Ensure that your <strong>attachment size<\/strong>, if it\u2019s many megabytes (MB), is still less than your email provider\u2019s maximum allowable for sending and receiving. Gmail and Yahoo, for instance, allow attachments up to 25MB, whereas Outlook\/Hotmail allow only 10MB attachments. However, files that are gigabytes (GB) large can be shared by using email to permit access to them where they\u2019re hosted in cloud storage services such as Google Drive, Microsoft OneDrive, Dropbox, and many others that have varying limits from 5GB for no-cost to 10TB for paid storage <a href=\"http:\/\/www.thewindowsclub.com\/attachment-size-limits-outlook-gmail-yahoo\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">(Khanna, 2017)<\/a>.<\/li>\r\n \t<li>Always <strong>check to ensure that you\u2019ve attached a document<\/strong> as part of your editing process. It shows that you lack attention to detail if your recipient responds to remind you to attach the document. Some of the more sophisticated email providers will remind you to do this as soon as you hit the Send button if you\u2019ve mentioned an attachment in your message but haven\u2019t yet actually attached it. If you get into the habit of relying on this feature in one of your email providers (e.g., your personal Gmail account) but are on your own in others (e.g., your work or school email provider), the false sense of security can hurt you at some point when using the latter.<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<a href=\"#menu\">Return to the Email Parts menu<\/a>\r\n<h1><a id=\"6111\"><\/a>6.1.11: Before Sending Your Email<\/h1>\r\nBefore hitting the Send button, follow through on the entire writing process described throughout this textbook\u2019s Unit I, especially the Editing stage with its evaluation, revision, and proofreading sub-stages explored in (see <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/part\/chapter-5-the-writing-process-4-editing\/\">Ch. 5<\/a>). Put yourself in your reader\u2019s position and assess whether you\u2019ve achieved the purpose you set out to achieve in the first place. Evaluate also if you\u2019ve struck the appropriate tone and formality. If you\u2019re aware that your tone is too angry, for instance, cool down by focusing on other business for a while. When you come back to your email draft the next day, you will usually find that you don\u2019t feel as strongly about what you wrote the day before. Review the advice about netiquette in \u00a76.2, then replace the angry words with more carefully chosen expressions to craft a more mature response before hitting the Send button. You\u2019ll feel much better about this in the end than receiving the threat-heavy response your angry email would have prompted had you gone through with sending it.\r\n\r\nAfter revising generally, <strong>always proofread<\/strong> an email. In any professional situation, but especially in important ones related to gaining and keeping employment, any typo or error related to spelling, grammar, or punctuation can cost you dearly. A poorly written email is insulting because it effectively says to the recipient: \u201cYou weren\u2019t important enough for me to take the time to ensure that this email was properly written.\u201d Worse, poor writing can cause miscommunication if it places the burden of interpretation on the reader to figure out what the writer meant to say if that\u2019s not clear. If the recipient acts on misinterpretations, and others base their actions on that action, you can soon find that even small errors can have damaging ripple effects that infuriate everyone involved.\r\n<h2>Table 6.1.11: Editing a Poorly Written Information Request Email<\/h2>\r\n<table style=\"width: 100%;border-collapse: collapse\" border=\"1\">\r\n<tbody>\r\n<tr>\r\n<th style=\"width: 50%\">Poorly Written Email Example<\/th>\r\n<th style=\"width: 50%\">Improved Email Draft<\/th>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<tr>\r\n<td style=\"width: 50%\">hey, think you made a mistake marking my last assinement i did what is supposed to do if its cuz i didnt get it in by the 5th its cuz i had a bad breakup it was so bad i had to see a councilor thats why i havnt bin around hope you understand. should of said that earlier maybe. oh and whens the next thing due. let me know as soon as u get this ok thanks bye<\/td>\r\n<td style=\"width: 50%\">Hello, Professor Morgan:\r\n\r\nCould you please clarify why I failed the previous assignment?\r\n\r\nI believe I followed the instructions but may have been confused about the due date while dealing with some personal issues. If so, I apologize for my late submission and understand if that\u2019s the reason for the fail. I just wanted to confirm that that\u2019s the reason and whether there\u2019s anything I can do to make up for it.\r\n\r\nI assure you it won\u2019t happen again, and I\u2019ll pay closer attention to the syllabus deadlines from now on.\r\n\r\nMuch appreciated,\r\n\r\nTaylor<\/td>\r\n<\/tr>\r\n<\/tbody>\r\n<\/table>\r\nThe poorly written draft has the look of a hastily and angrily written text to a \u201cfrenemy.\u201d An email to a superior, however, calls for a much more formal, tactful, courteous, and apologetic approach. The undifferentiated wall of text that omits or botches standard email parts such as opening and closing salutations is the first sign of trouble. The lack of capitalization, poor spelling (e.g.,<em> councilor<\/em> instead of <em>counsellor<\/em>), run-on sentences and lack of other punctuation such as apostrophes for contractions, as well as the inappropriate personal detail all suggest that the writer doesn\u2019t take their studies seriously enough to deserve any favours. Besides tacking on a question at the end, one that could be easily answered by reading the syllabus, the writer is ultimately unclear about what they want; if it\u2019s an explanation for why they failed, then they must be upfront about that. The rudeness of the closing is more likely to enrage the recipient than get them to deliver the requested information.\r\n\r\nThe improved version stands a much better chance of a sympathetic response. It corrects the problems of the first draft starting with properly framing the message with expected formal email parts. It benefits from a more courteous tone in a message that frontloads a clear and polite request for information in the opening. The supporting detail in the message body and apologetic closing suggest that the student, despite their faults, is well aware of how to communicate like a professional to achieve a particular goal.\r\n\r\nAfter running such a quality-assurance check on your email, your final step before sending it should involve protecting yourself against losing it to a technical glitch. Get in the habit of copying your email message text (ctrl. + A, ctrl. + C) just before hitting the Send button, then checking your Sent folder immediately to confirm that the email sent properly. If your message vanished due to some random malfunction, as can happen occasionally, immediately open a blank MS Word or Notepad document and paste the text there (ctrl. + V) to save it. That way, you don\u2019t have to waste five minutes rewriting the entire message after you solve the connectivity issues or whatever else caused the glitch.\r\n\r\nFor similar views on email best practices, see Guffey, Loewy, and Almonte (2016, pp. 90-97), which furnished some of the information given above.\r\n<div class=\"textbox key-takeaways\">\r\n<h3>Key Takeaway<\/h3>\r\nFollow standard conventions for writing each part of a professional or academic email, making strategic choices about the content and level of formality appropriate for the audience and occasion.\r\n\r\n<\/div>\r\n<div class=\"textbox exercises\">\r\n<h3>Exercises<\/h3>\r\n1. Take one of the worst emails you\u2019ve ever seen. It could be from a friend, colleague, family member, professional, or other.\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px\">i. Copy and paste it into a blank document, but change the name of its author and don\u2019t include their real email address (protect their confidentiality).\r\nii. Use MS Word\u2019s Track Changes comment feature to identify as many organizational errors as you can.\r\niii. Again using Track Changes, correct all of the stylistic and writing errors.<\/p>\r\n2. Let\u2019s say you just graduated from your program and have been putting your name out there, applying to job postings, networking, and letting friends and colleagues know that you\u2019re on the job market. You get an out-of-the-blue email from someone named Dr. Emily Conway, the friend of a friend, who needs someone to put together some marketing brochures for her start-up medical clinic in time for a conference in a week. It\u2019s not entirely what you\u2019ve been training to do, but you\u2019ve done something like it for a course assignment once, and you need rent money, so you decide to accept the offer. Dr. Conway\u2019s email asks you five questions in the message body:\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px\">i. Our mutual friend mentioned you just graduated from college. What program? How\u2019d you do?\r\nii. Can you send a sample of your marketing work?\r\niii. How much would you charge for designing a double-sided 8\u00bdx11\" tri-fold brochure?\r\niv. When you\u2019ve completed your design, would you be okay with sending me the ready-to-print PDF and original Adobe Illustrator file?\r\nv. If I already have all the text and pictures, how soon can you do this? Can you handle the printing as well?<\/p>\r\nDr. Conway closes her email asking if you\u2019d like to meet to discuss the opportunity in more detail and signs off as Emily. Draft a formal response email that abides by the conventions of a formal email.\r\n\r\n<\/div>\r\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\r\n<h2>References<\/h2>\r\n<p class=\"hangingindent\">Guffey, M., Loewy, D., &amp; Almonte, R. (2016). <em>Essentials of Business Communication<\/em> (8th Can. ed.). Toronto, Nelson.<\/p>\r\n<p class=\"hangingindent\">Khanna, K. (2017, March 25). Attachment size limits for Outlook, Gmail, Yahoo, Hotmail, Facebook and WhatsApp. <em>The Windows Club<\/em>. Retrieved from <a href=\"http:\/\/www.thewindowsclub.com\/attachment-size-limits-outlook-gmail-yahoo\">http:\/\/www.thewindowsclub.com\/attachment-size-limits-outlook-gmail-yahoo<\/a><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"hangingindent\">Klockars-Clauser, S. (2010, March 26). Flaming computer \u2013 \u201cdon\u2019t panic\u201d (4549185468). <em>Wikimedia Commons<\/em>. Retrieved from <a href=\"https:\/\/commons.wikimedia.org\/wiki\/File:Flaming_computer_-_%22don%27t_panic%22_(4549185468).jpg\">https:\/\/commons.wikimedia.org\/wiki\/File:Flaming_computer_-_%22don%27t_panic%22_(4549185468).jpg<\/a><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"hangingindent\">Neel, A. (2017, March 7). Follow your passion. <em>Unsplash<\/em>. Retrieved from <a href=\"https:\/\/unsplash.com\/photos\/QLqNalPe0RA\">https:\/\/unsplash.com\/photos\/QLqNalPe0RA<\/a><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"hangingindent\">Office of the Privacy Commissioner of Canada. (2010, July 21). Collection and use of employee\u2019s email deemed acceptable for purposes of investigating breach of agreement. Retrieved from <a href=\"https:\/\/www.priv.gc.ca\/en\/opc-actions-and-decisions\/investigations\/investigations-into-businesses\/2009\/pipeda-2009-019\/\">https:\/\/www.priv.gc.ca\/en\/opc-actions-and-decisions\/investigations\/investigations-into-businesses\/2009\/pipeda-2009-019\/<\/a><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"hangingindent\">The Radicati Group. (2017, January). Email statistics report, 2017-2021. Palo Alto, CA: The Radicati Group, Inc. Retrieved from <a href=\"https:\/\/www.radicati.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/01\/Email-Statistics-Report-2017-2021-Executive-Summary.pdf\">https:\/\/www.radicati.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/01\/Email-Statistics-Report-2017-2021-Executive-Summary.pdf<\/a><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"hangingindent\">Rawpixel. (2018, March 28). Person using MacBook Pro on brown wooden desk 1061588. Retrieved from <a href=\"https:\/\/www.pexels.com\/photo\/person-using-macbook-pro-on-brown-wooden-desk-1061588\/\">https:\/\/www.pexels.com\/photo\/person-using-macbook-pro-on-brown-wooden-desk-1061588\/<\/a><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"hangingindent\">Tumisu. (2017, December 14). Contact us contact email phone mail inbox. Retrieved from <a href=\"https:\/\/pixabay.com\/en\/contact-us-contact-email-phone-2993000\/\">https:\/\/pixabay.com\/en\/contact-us-contact-email-phone-2993000\/<\/a><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"hangingindent\">Vanderkam, L. (2016, March 29). What is an appropriate response time to email? <em>Fast Company<\/em>. Retrieved from <a href=\"https:\/\/www.fastcompany.com\/3058066\/what-is-an-appropriate-response-time-to-email\">https:\/\/www.fastcompany.com\/3058066\/what-is-an-appropriate-response-time-to-email<\/a><\/p>\r\n\r\n<\/div>","rendered":"<div class=\"textbox learning-objectives\">\n<h3>Learning Objectives<\/h3>\n<p>1. Identify characteristics of effective professional emails.<\/p>\n<p>2. Plan, write, revise, and edit short documents and messages that are organized, complete, and tailored to specific audiences.<\/p>\n<ol type=\"i\">\n<li>Format and write documents and messages such as emails.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/div>\n<p>Electronic mail, widely known as \u201ce-mail\u201d or just \u201cemail,\u201d is by volume the most popular written communication channel in the history of human civilization. With emails being so cheap and easy to send on desktop and laptop computers, as well as on mobile phones and tablets, a staggering 280<em> billion<\/em> emails are sent globally per <em>day<\/em> <a href=\"https:\/\/www.radicati.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/01\/Email-Statistics-Report-2017-2021-Executive-Summary.pdf\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">(Radicati, 2017)<\/a>\u2014that\u2019s over a hundred trillion per year. Most are for business purposes because email is such a flexible channel ideal for anything from short, routine information shares, requests, and responses the length of a text, to important formal messages delivering the content that letters and memos used to handle. Its ability to send a message to one person or as many people as you have addresses for, integrate with calendars for scheduling meetings and events, send document attachments, and send automatic replies makes it the most versatile communication channel in the workplace.<\/p>\n<p>This mindboggling quantity of 3.2 million emails sent per second doesn\u2019t necessarily mean that quality is a non-issue for email, however. Because it has, to some extent, replaced mailed letters for formal correspondence, emails related to important occasions such as applying for and maintaining employment must be impeccably well written. Your email represents you in your physical absence, as well as the company you work for if that\u2019s the case, so it must be both\u00a0<em>good<\/em>\u00a0(well-written) and appropriate.<\/p>\n<p>First, ensure that you really need an email to represent you because emailing merely to avoid speaking in person or calling by phone can do more harm than good (see <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/2-3-selecting-appropriate-channels\/\">\u00a72.3<\/a>, especially <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/2-3-selecting-appropriate-channels#t23\/\">Table 2.3<\/a>, above on \u00a0channel selection). If an email is necessary, however, then it must be <em>good<\/em>. As people who make decisions about your livelihood, the employers and clients you email can be highly judgmental about the quality of your writing. To them it&#8217;s an indication of your professionalism, attention to detail, education, and even intelligence. The writing quality in a single important email can be the difference between getting hired and getting fired or remaining unemployed.<\/p>\n<p>Let\u2019s say, for instance, that you get an email from a customer and they mention in it that they\u2019ve been shopping around for a company to do a custom job for them. This means they\u2019re emailing other companies with the same inquiry. Let\u2019s say also that your competitors offer similar services at similar prices and are similarly reviewed positively online. Tough choice for the customer. With everything else being equal, the quality of the email responses may be the deciding factor. Responding to the customer quickly gives you an advantage because you show them that you can get things done promptly. If your email is also well written in a professional style (see <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/4-5-standard-business-style#452\/\">\u00a74.5.2<\/a> above for the 6 Cs) and error-free in every way due to effective editing and proofreading (see <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/part\/chapter-5-the-writing-process-4-editing\/\">Ch. 5<\/a> above), you stand a much better chance of getting the job.<\/p>\n<p>Comparing this with another company\u2019s email that came a few days later with multiple writing errors in it, the customer will likely go with the company that wrote the better email. Even though the quality of communication doesn\u2019t necessarily guarantee quality of work in the product or service a company provides, customers will assume a connection. Indeed, the quality of communication can certainly say volumes about work ethic and attention to detail.<\/p>\n<p>The customer\u2019s basis for judgment here is that if a company\u2019s communications are good, it must be because they\u2019ve hired a customer service rep dedicated to responding to people. This means they have the money to do so, which means they\u2019re successful, which must be because they do a good job, which means they\u2019ll do a good job on what the customer wants them to do. We must all try to make a similarly strong impression in any situation where the quality of email matters. Let\u2019s turn our attention, then, to the ten aspects you must take care of when sending an important email in the order they appear in the email from top to bottom.<\/p>\n<h2><a id=\"menu\"><\/a>Email Parts<\/h2>\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"#611\">6.1.1: Email Address<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"#612\">6.1.2: Timestamp &amp; Punctuality<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"#613\">6.1.3: Subject Line Title<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"#614\">6.1.4: Opening Salutation &amp; Recipient Selection<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"#615\">6.1.5: Message Opening<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"#616\">6.1.6: Message Body<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"#617\">6.1.7: Message Closing<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"#618\">6.1.8: Closing Salutation<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"#619\">6.1.9: E-signature<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"#610\">6.1.10: Attachments<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"#6111\">6.1.11: Before Sending your Email<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Before delving into this detail, however, let\u2019s review the advantages, disadvantages, and occasions for using email given earlier in <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/2-3-selecting-appropriate-channelst23\/\">Table 2.3<\/a> on channel selection.<\/p>\n<h3 id=\"email\">Table 2.3 Excerpt: Email Pros, Cons, and Proper Use<\/h3>\n<table style=\"width: 100%;border-collapse: collapse\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<th style=\"width: 25%\">Advantages<\/th>\n<th style=\"width: 25%\">Disadvantages<\/th>\n<th style=\"width: 25%\">Expectations<\/th>\n<th style=\"width: 25%\">Appropriate Use<\/th>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 25%;vertical-align: top\">\n<ul>\n<li>Delivers messages instantly anywhere in the world to anyone with an internet connection and email address you have<\/li>\n<li>Sends to one or many people at once, including secondary audiences CC\u2019d or BCC\u2019d<\/li>\n<li>Allows you to attach documents up to several megabytes in size or links to any internet webpages<\/li>\n<li>Allows for a back-and-forth thread on the topic in the subject line<\/li>\n<li>Archives written correspondence for review even decades later<\/li>\n<li>Can be done on any mobile device with an internet connection<\/li>\n<li>Is free (beyond your subscription fees to an internet or phone provider)<\/li>\n<li>Is somewhat permanent in that emails exist somewhere on a server even if deleted by both sender and receiver<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 25%;vertical-align: top\">\n<ul>\n<li>Gives the illusion of privacy: your messages can be forwarded to anyone, monitored by your company or an outside security agency, retrieved with a warrant, or hacked even if both you and receiver delete them<\/li>\n<li>Can be slow when used for back-and-forth dialogue<\/li>\n<li>Tone may be misread (e.g., jokes misunderstood) due to the absence of nonverbal cues<\/li>\n<li>May be sent automatically to the recipient\u2019s spam folder or otherwise overlooked or deleted without being read given the volume of emails some people get in a day<\/li>\n<li>Subject to errors such as hitting \u201csend\u201d prematurely or replying to all when only the sender should be replied to<\/li>\n<li>Subject to limits on document attachment size<\/li>\n<li>Subject to spam (unsolicited emails)<\/li>\n<li>Regretted emails can\u2019t be taken back or edited<\/li>\n<li>Requires a working internet connection on a computing device, which isn\u2019t available everywhere in the world<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 25%;vertical-align: top\">\n<ul>\n<li>Reply within 24 hours, or sooner if company policy requires it<\/li>\n<li>Follow conventions for writing a clear subject line; salutation; message opening, body, and closing; closing salutation, and e-signature<\/li>\n<li>Netiquette: be as kind as you should be in person; don\u2019t write emails angrily<\/li>\n<li>Edit to ensure coverage of the subject indicated in the subject line with no more or less information than the recipient needs to do their job<\/li>\n<li>Proofread to ensure correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling because errors compromise your credibility<\/li>\n<li>Avoid confusion due to vagueness that requires that the recipient respond asking for clarification<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 25%;vertical-align: top\">\n<ul>\n<li>Quickly deliver a message that doesn\u2019t need an immediate response<\/li>\n<li>Send a message and receive a response in writing as evidence for future review (lay down a paper trail)<\/li>\n<li>Use when confidentiality isn\u2019t necessary<\/li>\n<li>Send electronic documents as attachments<\/li>\n<li>Send the same message to several people at once, including perhaps people whose email address you need to hide from the others (using BCC) to respect their confidentiality<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<h1><a id=\"611\"><\/a>6.1.1: Email Address<\/h1>\n<p>Just as with physical \u201csnail mail\u201d you pick out of your Canada Post mailbox, the first thing you see when an email arrives in your inbox is who it\u2019s from. The address determines immediately how you feel about that email\u2014whether excited, uninterested, curious, angry, hopeful, scared, or just obliged to read it. Your email address will create similar impressions on those you email depending on your relationship to them. It\u2019s therefore important that you send from the right email address.<\/p>\n<p>If you work for a company, obviously you must use your company email address for company business. Customers expect it. Bear in mind that in a legal and right-to-privacy sense, you don\u2019t own these emails. If they exist on a company server, company administrators can read any of them if they are investigating a breach of company policy or criminal activity <a href=\"https:\/\/www.priv.gc.ca\/en\/opc-actions-and-decisions\/investigations\/investigations-into-businesses\/2009\/pipeda-2009-019\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">(Office of the Privacy Commissioner of Canada, 2010)<\/a>. This means that you must be careful not to write anything in an email that could compromise your employability.<\/p>\n<p>If you\u2019re writing on your own behalf for any business or job-application purposes, it\u2019s vital that you have a respectable-looking email address. Using a college or university email is a good bet because it proves that you indeed are attending or attended a post-secondary institution when you\u2019ve made that claim in your application. If your school email address has expired, however, it\u2019s worth starting an account that has a straightforward address showing your name. If your name is Justin Trudeau, for instance, your ideal email address would simply be justin.trudeau@ with one of the major email providers like Gmail or Outlook\/Hotmail. Of course, everybody knows that all of the straightforward firstname.lastname@ addresses have been taken, so there\u2019s nothing wrong with variations that include middle names or initials and small numbers as long as they don\u2019t get too big, such as more than 25 characters.<\/p>\n<p>What\u2019s fundamentally important, however, is that you retire your teenage joke email address. If you have one of these, it may have scored some points with friends back in high school, but now that you\u2019re an adult, it will only do irreparable harm to your employability prospects if you\u2019re using it for job applications. Any potential employer or other professional who gets an email from pornstar6969baby@whatever.com, speedball.playa@hotmail.com, or crazy.unicorn.girl@yahoo.com is going to delete it without even opening it.<\/p>\n<p>Also, forget about clinging to the fantasy of having only one email address to deal with. Just as your demeanour and language style changes in social, family, and professional contexts, you must likewise hold multiple email accounts\u2014one for work, one for school, and one for personal matters. Each of the 3.8 billion email users in the world has an average of 1.7 email accounts <a href=\"https:\/\/www.radicati.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/01\/Email-Statistics-Report-2017-2021-Executive-Summary.pdf\">(Radicati, 2017)<\/a>. It\u2019s likely that you will have more than three throughout your life and retire accounts as you move on from school and various workplaces. If you can manage it, you can set up forwarding so that you can run multiple accounts out of one, except where company or institutional policy requires that you work entirely within a designated email provider or client.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"#menu\">Return to the Email Parts menu<\/a><\/p>\n<h1><a id=\"612\"><\/a>6.1.2: Timestamp &amp; Punctuality<\/h1>\n<p>The timestamp that comes with each email means that punctuality matters and raises the question of what the expectations are for acceptable lag time between you receiving an email and returning an expected response. Of course, you can reply as soon as possible as you would when texting and have a back-and-forth recorded in a thread. What if you need more time, however?<\/p>\n<p>Though common wisdom used to be that the business standard is to reply within 24 hours, the availability of email on the smartphones that almost everyone carries in their pockets has reduced that expectation to a few hours. Recent research shows that half of email responses in business environments in fact comes within two hours <a href=\"https:\/\/www.fastcompany.com\/3058066\/what-is-an-appropriate-response-time-to-email\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">(Vanderkam, 2016)<\/a>. Some businesses have internal policies that demand even quicker responses because business moves fast. If you can get someone\u2019s business sooner than the competition because you reply sooner, then of course you\u2019re going to make every effort to reply right away. Of course, the actual work you do can get in the way of email, but you must prioritize incoming work in order to stay in business. After all, the early bird gets the worm.<\/p>\n<p>What if you can\u2019t reply within the expected number of hours? The courteous course of action is to reply as soon as possible with a brief message saying that you\u2019ll be turning your attention to this matter as soon as you can. You don\u2019t have to go into detail about what\u2019s delaying you unless it\u2019s relevant to the topic at hand, but courtesy requires that you at least give a timeline for a fuller response and stick to it.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"#menu\">Return to the Email Parts menu<\/a><\/p>\n<h1><a id=\"613\"><\/a>6.1.3: Subject Line Title<\/h1>\n<p>The next most important piece of information you see when scanning your inbox is the email\u2019s subject line. The busy professional who receives dozens of emails each day prioritizes their workload and response efforts based largely on the content of the subject lines appearing in their inbox. Because it acts as a title for the email, the subject line should accurately summarize its topic in 3-7 words.<\/p>\n<p>The goldilocks wordcount range here is important because your subject line shouldn\u2019t be so vague that its one or two words will be misleading, nor so long and detailed that its eight-plus words will be cut off by your inbox layout. Though it must be specific to the email topic, details about specific times and places, for instance, should really be in the message itself rather than in the subject line (see Table 6.1.3 below). Also, avoid using words in your subject line that might make your email look like spam. A subject line such as <em>Hello<\/em> or <em>That thing we talked about<\/em> might appear to be a hook to get you to open an email that contains a malware virus. This may prompt the recipient to delete it to be on the safe side, or their email provider may automatically send it to the junkmail box, which people rarely check. It will be as good as gone, in any case.<\/p>\n<h2>Table 6.1.3: Subject Line Length<\/h2>\n<table style=\"width: 100%;border-collapse: collapse\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<th style=\"width: 33.33%\">Too Short<\/th>\n<th style=\"width: 33.33%\">Just Right<\/th>\n<th style=\"width: 33.33%\">Too Long and Detailed<\/th>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\">Problem<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\">Problem with your product order<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\">Problem with your order for an LG washer and dryer submitted on April 29 at 11:31pm<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\">Meeting<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\">Rescheduling Nov. 6 meeting<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\">Rescheduling our 3pm November 6 meeting for 11am November 8<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\">Parking Permits<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\">Summer parking permit pickup<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\">When to pick up your summer parking permits from security<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p>Stylistically, notice that appropriately sized subject lines typically abbreviate where they can and avoid articles (<em>the, a, an)<\/em>, capitalization beyond the first word (except for proper nouns; see <a href=\"#\">Table 5.5.1<\/a>), and excessive adjectives.<\/p>\n<p>Whatever you do, don\u2019t leave your subject line blank! Even if you\u2019re just firing off a quick email to send an attachment to yourself and have no other words besides, the subject line text will be essential to your ability to retrieve that file down the road. Say you find yourself desperately needing that file months or even years later because the laptop it was saved on was stolen or damaged beyond repair, which you couldn\u2019t have predicted at the time you sent it. A search in your email provider for words matching those you used in the subject line will quickly narrow down the email in question. Without words in the subject line or message, however, you\u2019ll have no choice but to guess at when you sent the email and waste time going through page after page of sent-folder messages looking for it. A few seconds spent writing a good subject line can potentially save hours of frustrating searches.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"#menu\">Return to the Email Parts menu<\/a><\/p>\n<h1><a id=\"614\"><\/a>6.1.4: Opening Salutation &amp; Recipient Selection<\/h1>\n<p>When a reader opens your email, its opening salutation indicates not only who the message is for but also its level of formality. As you can see in Table 6.1.4 below, opening with <em>Dear [Full Name]<\/em> or Greetings,<em> [Full Name]:<\/em> strikes an appropriately respectful tone when writing to someone for the first time in a professional context. When greeting someone you\u2019ve emailed before, <em>Hello, [First name]:<\/em> maintains a semiformal tone. When you\u2019re more casually addressing a familiar colleague, a simple <em>Hi [First name],<\/em> is just fine.<\/p>\n<h2>Table 6.1.4: Opening Salutation Examples<\/h2>\n<table style=\"width: 100%;border-collapse: collapse\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<th style=\"width: 33.33%\">First-time Formality<\/th>\n<th style=\"width: 33.33%\">Ongoing Semiformal<\/th>\n<th style=\"width: 33.33%\">Informal<\/th>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\">Dear Ms. Melody Nelson:<br \/>\n<em>Dear Ms. Nelson:<br \/>\nGreetings, Ms. Melody Nelson:<br \/>\nGreetings, Ms. Nelson:<\/em><\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\"><em>Hello, Melody:<br \/>\nHello again, Melody:<br \/>\nThanks, Melody.<\/em> (in response to something given)<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\"><em>Hi Mel,<br \/>\nHey Mel,<br \/>\nMel,<\/em><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p>Notice that the punctuation includes a comma after the greeting word and a colon after their name for formal and semiformal occasions following <a href=\"#\">Comma Rule 2.1<\/a> and <a href=\"#\">Colon Rule 1.2<\/a>. Informal greetings, however, relax these rules by omitting the comma after the greeting word and replacing the colon with a comma. Don\u2019t play it both ways with two commas; <em>Hi, Jeremy,<\/em> appears too crowded with them.<\/p>\n<p>Depending on the nature of the message, you can use alternative greeting possibilities. If you\u2019re thanking someone for information they\u2019ve sent you, you can do so right away in the greeting; e.g., <em>Many thanks for the contact list, Maggie<\/em>. When your email exchange turns into a back-and-forth thread involving several emails, it\u2019s customary to drop the salutation altogether and treat each message as if it were a text message even in formal situations.<\/p>\n<p>Formality also dictates whether you use the recipient\u2019s first name or full name in your salutation. If you\u2019re writing to someone you know well or responding to an email where the sender signed off at the bottom using their first name, they\u2019ve given you the green light to address them by their first name in your response. If you\u2019re addressing someone formally for the first time, however, you may want to strike an appropriately respectful tone by using their full name. If you\u2019re addressing a group, a simple <em>Hello, all: or Hello, team:<\/em> will do.<\/p>\n<p>Be careful when selecting recipients, however. First, spell their name correctly because email addresses often have non-standard combinations of name fragments and numbers; any typos will result in the server bouncing your email back to you as being unsent. Waiting before entering their name in the recipient or \u201cTo\u201d field is also wise in case you accidentally hit the Send button before you\u2019re finished drafting your email. If you prematurely send an email, a quick follow-up apologizing for the confusion and the completed message is the best damage control you can do, but it requires immediate action. Another preventative measure is to compose a message offline, such as in an MS Word or simple Notepad document devoid of formatting, then copy and paste it into the email field when you\u2019re ready to send.<\/p>\n<p>If you have a primary recipient in mind but want others to see it, you can include them in the CC (carbon copy) line. (If confidentiality requires that recipients shouldn\u2019t see one another\u2019s addresses, BCC [blind carbon copy] them instead.) Be selective with whom you CC, however. Yes, it\u2019s good to keep your manager in the loop, but you may want to do this only at the beginning and the end of a project\u2019s email \u201cpaper\u201d trail. They will appreciate that things are under way and wrapping up but may get annoyed if their inbox is flooded with every little mundane back-and-forth throughout the process. If in doubt, speak with your manager about their preferences for being CC\u2019d.<\/p>\n<p>Never \u201creply all\u201d so that everyone included in the \u201cTo\u201d line and CC\u2019d sees your reply unless your response includes information that everyone absolutely must see. If your manager sends some information to all 80 people in your department, for instance, your reply-all response that just acknowledges receipt with an \u201cOK, thanks!\u201d which is unnecessary in the first place, will anger 79 people who expected to see valuable information. If the first email was about a departmental meeting time though the location was yet to be determined, but you now have that information because you did the booking, of course you would reply all to provide that necessary follow-up.<\/p>\n<p>Bear in mind that, concerning <strong>email security<\/strong>, no matter who you select as the primary or secondary (CC\u2019d) recipients of your email, always assume that it may be forwarded on to other people, including those you might not want to see it. Just because you\u2019ve selected recipients doesn\u2019t necessarily make your email a private channel. You have no control over whether the recipients forward it on to others, what the server administrators do with it (legally or not), or if your account or the server is hacked. If your email contains any legally sensitive content, it can even be retrieved from the server storing it with a warrant from law enforcement. A good rule of thumb is to <strong>never send an email that you would be embarrassed by if it were read by your boss, your family, or a jury<\/strong>. No technical barriers prevent it from falling into their hands.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"#menu\">Return to the Email Parts menu<\/a><\/p>\n<h1><a id=\"615\"><\/a>6.1.5: Message Opening<\/h1>\n<p>Most emails will be direct-approach messages where you get right to the point in the opening sentence immediately below the opening salutation. As we saw in <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/4-1-choosing-an-organizational-pattern#411\/\">\u00a74.1.1<\/a> above on message organization, the <strong>direct-approach<\/strong> pattern does the reader a favour by not burying the main point under a pile of contextual background. If you send a busy professional on a treasure hunt for your main point, a request for information for example, don\u2019t blame them if they don\u2019t find it and don\u2019t provide the information you asked for. They might have given up before they got there or missed it when skimming, as busy people tend to do. By stating in the opening exactly what you want the recipient to do, however, you increase your chances of achieving that goal.<b><\/b><\/p>\n<h2><a id=\"t615\"><\/a>Table 6.1.5: Direct- vs. Indirect-approach Email Openings<\/h2>\n<table style=\"width: 100%;border-collapse: collapse\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<th style=\"width: 50%\">Sample Direct Opening<\/th>\n<th style=\"width: 50%\">Sample Indirect Opening<\/th>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 50%\">We have reviewed your application and are pleased to offer you the position of retail sales manager at the East 32nd and 4th Street location of Swansong Clothing.<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 50%\">Thank you very much for your application to the retail sales manager position at the East 32nd and 4th Street location of Swansong Clothing. Though we received a large volume of high-quality applications for this position, we were impressed by your experience and qualifications.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p><strong>Indirect-approach<\/strong> emails should be rare and only sent in extenuating circumstances. Using email to deliver bad news or address a sensitive topic can be seen as a cowardly way of avoiding difficult situations that should be dealt with in person or, if the people involved are too far distant, at least by phone (see <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/2-3-selecting-appropriate-channels#t23\/\">Table 2.3<\/a> and Figure 2.3 on channel selection). Other circumstances that might force you to use the indirect approach for emails include the following:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Needing to use persuasive techniques<\/li>\n<li>Having no other means of contacting the recipient<\/li>\n<li>Needing to get the email exchange in writing in case the situation escalates and must be handled as evidence by higher authorities<\/li>\n<li>Needing to deliver a large number of bad-news messages without having the time or resources to individually customize each, such as when you are sending rejection notices to job applicants (see the sample indirect opening in <a href=\"#t615\">Table 6.1.5<\/a> above); out of expedience, it\u2019s understandable if these are boiler-plate responses<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>In such cases, the indirect approach means that the opening should use buffer strategies to ease the recipient into the bad news or set the proper context for discussing the sensitive topic (see <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/4-1-choosing-an-organizational-pattern#412\/\">\u00a74.1.2<\/a> for more on the indirect approach).<\/p>\n<p>Otherwise, your email must pass the <strong>first-screen test<\/strong>, which is that everything the recipient needs to see is visible in the opening without forcing them to scroll further down for it. Before pressing the Send button, put yourself in your reader\u2019s shoes and consider whether your message passes the first-screen test. If not, and if you have no good reason to take the indirect approach, then re-organize your email message by moving (copying, cutting, and pasting, or ctrl. + C, ctrl. + X, ctrl. + v) its main point up to make it the opening of your message.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"#menu\">Return to the Email Parts menu<\/a><\/p>\n<h1><a id=\"616\"><\/a>6.1.6: Message Body<\/h1>\n<p>Emails long enough to divide into paragraphs follow the three-part message organization (outlined in <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/4-1-choosing-an-organizational-pattern\/\">\u00a74.1<\/a>) where the message body supports the opening main point with explanatory details such as background information justifying an information request. With brevity being so important in emails, keeping the message body concise, with no more information than the recipient needs to do their job, is extremely important to the message\u2019s success. The message body therefore doesn\u2019t need proper three-part paragraphs (see <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/4-4-forming-effective-paragraphs#441\/\">\u00a74.4.1<\/a> above). In fact, one-sentence paragraphs (single spaced with a line of space between each) and bullet-point lists (see <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/4-6-effective-document-design#465\/\">\u00a74.6.5<\/a>) are fine. If your message grows in length beyond the first screen, document design features such as bold headings help direct readers to the information they need (see <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/chapter\/4-6-effective-document-design#462\/\">\u00a74.6.2<\/a>). If your message gets any larger, moving it into an attached document is better than writing several screens of large paragraphs. Unlike novels, people don\u2019t enjoy reading emails per se.<\/p>\n<p>Also keep email messages brief by sticking to one topic per email. If you have a second topic you must cover with the same recipient(s), sending a separate email about it can potentially save you time if you need to retrieve that topic content later. If the subject line doesn\u2019t describe the topic you\u2019re looking for because it was a second or third topic you added after the one summarized in the subject line, finding that hidden message content will probably involve opening several emails. A subject line must perfectly summarize all of an email\u2019s contents to be useful for archiving and retrieval, so sticking to one topic per email will ensure both brevity and archive retrieval efficiency.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"#menu\">Return to the Email Parts menu<\/a><\/p>\n<h1><a id=\"617\"><\/a>6.1.7: Message Closing<\/h1>\n<p>An email closing usually includes <strong>action information<\/strong> such as direction on what to do with the information in the message above and deadlines for action and response. If your email message requests that its nine recipients each fill out a linked <a href=\"https:\/\/doodle.com\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Doodle.com<\/a> survey to determine a good meeting time, for instance, you would end by saying, <em>Please fill out the Doodle survey by 4pm Friday, May 18<\/em>. If the message doesn\u2019t call for action details, some closing thought (e.g., <em>I\u2019m happy to help. Please drop me a line if you have any questions<\/em>) ends it without giving the impression of being rudely abrupt. Goodwill statements, such as <em>Thanks again for your feedback on our customer service<\/em>, are necessary especially in emails involving gratitude.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"#menu\">Return to the Email Parts menu<\/a><\/p>\n<h1><a id=\"618\"><\/a>6.1.8: Closing Salutation<\/h1>\n<p>A courteous closing to an email involves a combination of a pleasant sign-off word or phrase and your first name. As with the opening salutation, closing salutation possibilities depend on the nature of the message and where you want to position it on the formality spectrum, as shown in Table 6.1.8 below.<\/p>\n<h2><a id=\"t618\"><\/a>Table 6.1.8: Closing Salutation Examples<\/h2>\n<table style=\"width: 100%;border-collapse: collapse\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<th style=\"width: 33.33%\">Formal<\/th>\n<th style=\"width: 33.33%\">Semiformal<\/th>\n<th style=\"width: 33.33%\">Informal<\/th>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\"><em>Best wishes,<br \/>\nKind regards,<br \/>\nMuch appreciated,<br \/>\nSincerely,<br \/>\nWarm regards,<\/em><\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\"><em>Best,<br \/>\nGet better soon,<br \/>\nGood luck,<br \/>\nTake care,<br \/>\nMany thanks,<\/em><\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 33.33%\"><em>All good things,<br \/>\nBe well,<br \/>\nBye for now,<br \/>\nCheers,<br \/>\nCiao,<\/em><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p>Your first email to someone in a professional context should end with a more formal closing salutation. Later emails to the same person can use the appropriate semiformal closing salutation for the occasion. If you\u2019re on friendly, familiar terms with the person but still want to include email formalities, an informal closing salutation can bring a smile to their face. Notice in Table 6.1.8 that you capitalize only the first word in the closing salutation and add a comma at the end.<\/p>\n<p>Including your first name after the closing salutation ends in a friendly way as if to say, \u201cLet\u2019s be on a first-name basis\u201d if you weren\u2019t already, greenlighting your recipient to address you by your first name in their reply. In your physical absence, your name at the end is also a way of saying, like politicians chiming in at the end of campaign ads, \u201cI\u2019m [name] and I approve this message.\u201d It\u2019s a stamp of authorship. Omitting it gives the impression of being abrupt and too busy or important to stop for even a second of formal niceties.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"#menu\">Return to the Email Parts menu<\/a><\/p>\n<h1><a id=\"619\"><\/a>6.1.9: E-signature<\/h1>\n<p>Not to be confused with an electronic version of your handwritten signature, the e-signature that automatically appears at the very bottom of your email is like the business card you would hand to someone when networking. Every professional should have one. Like a business card, the e-signature includes all relevant contact information. At the very least, the e-signature should include the details given in Table 6.1.9 below.<\/p>\n<h2><a id=\"t619\"><\/a>Table 6.1.9: E-signature Part<\/h2>\n<table style=\"width: 100%;border-collapse: collapse\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<th style=\"width: 50%\">E-signature Parts<\/th>\n<th style=\"width: 50%\">Examples<\/th>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 50%\">Full Name, Professional Role<br \/>\nCompany Name<br \/>\nCompany address<br \/>\nPhone Number(s)<br \/>\nCompany website, Email address<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 50%\"><strong>Jessica Day<\/strong>, Graphic Designer<br \/>\nUXB Designs<br \/>\n492 Atwater Street<br \/>\nToronto, ON \u00a0M4M 2H4<br \/>\n416-555-2297 (c)<br \/>\n<a href=\"#\">uxb.com<\/a> |<a href=\"mailto:jessica.day@uxb.com\"> jessica.day@uxb.com<\/a><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 50%\">Full Name, Credentials<br \/>\nProfessional Role<br \/>\nCompany Name<br \/>\nCompany Address<br \/>\nPhone Number(s)<br \/>\nCompany website, email address<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 50%\"><strong>Winston Schmidt<\/strong>, MBA<br \/>\nSenior Marketing Consultant<br \/>\nTectonic Global Solutions Inc.<br \/>\n7819 Cambie Street, Vancouver, BC \u00a0V5K 1A4<br \/>\n604.555.2388 (w) | 604.555.9375 (c)<br \/>\n<a href=\"#\">tectonicglobal.com<\/a> | <a href=\"mailto:m.bennington@tgs.com\">m.bennington@tgs.com<\/a><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p>Depending on the individual\u2019s situation, variations on the e-signature include putting your educational credentials after your name (e.g., MBA) on the same line and professional role on the second line, especially if it\u2019s a long one, and the company address on one line or two. Also, those working for a company usually include the company logo to the left of their e-signature. Some instead (or additionally) add their profile picture, especially if they work independently, though this isn\u2019t always advisable because it may open you to biased reactions. Other professionals add links to their social media profiles such as LinkedIn and the company\u2019s Facebook and Twitter pages. For some ideas on what your e-signature could look like, simply image-search \u201cemail e-signature\u201d in your internet browser\u2019s search engine.<\/p>\n<p>If you haven\u2019t already, set up your e-signature in your email provider\u2019s settings or options page. In Gmail, for instance, click on the settings cog icon at the top right, select <em>Settings<\/em> from the dropdown menu, scroll down the <em>General<\/em> tab, and type your e-signature in the Signature field. Make absolutely sure that all of the details are correct and words spelled correctly. You don\u2019t want someone to point out that you\u2019ve spelled your professional role incorrectly after months of it appearing in hundreds of emails.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"#menu\">Return to the Email Parts menu<\/a><\/p>\n<h1><a id=\"6110\"><\/a>6.1.10: Attachments<\/h1>\n<p>Email\u2019s ability to help you send and receive documents makes it an indispensable tool for any business. Bear in mind a few best practices when attaching documents:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Always <strong>announce an attachment<\/strong> in an email message with a very brief description of its contents. For instance, <em>Please find attached the minutes from today\u2019s departmental meeting<\/em> might be all you write between the opening and closing salutations.<\/li>\n<li><strong>Never leave a message blank<\/strong> when attaching a document in an email to someone else. Your message should at least be like the one given above. Of course, including a message is up to you if you\u2019re sending yourself an attachment as an alternative to using a dedicated cloud storage service like Google Drive or Microsoft OneDrive. Even if it\u2019s just for yourself, however, at least including a subject line identifying the nature of the attachment will make locating the file easier months or even years later.<\/li>\n<li>Ensure that your <strong>attachment size<\/strong>, if it\u2019s many megabytes (MB), is still less than your email provider\u2019s maximum allowable for sending and receiving. Gmail and Yahoo, for instance, allow attachments up to 25MB, whereas Outlook\/Hotmail allow only 10MB attachments. However, files that are gigabytes (GB) large can be shared by using email to permit access to them where they\u2019re hosted in cloud storage services such as Google Drive, Microsoft OneDrive, Dropbox, and many others that have varying limits from 5GB for no-cost to 10TB for paid storage <a href=\"http:\/\/www.thewindowsclub.com\/attachment-size-limits-outlook-gmail-yahoo\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">(Khanna, 2017)<\/a>.<\/li>\n<li>Always <strong>check to ensure that you\u2019ve attached a document<\/strong> as part of your editing process. It shows that you lack attention to detail if your recipient responds to remind you to attach the document. Some of the more sophisticated email providers will remind you to do this as soon as you hit the Send button if you\u2019ve mentioned an attachment in your message but haven\u2019t yet actually attached it. If you get into the habit of relying on this feature in one of your email providers (e.g., your personal Gmail account) but are on your own in others (e.g., your work or school email provider), the false sense of security can hurt you at some point when using the latter.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><a href=\"#menu\">Return to the Email Parts menu<\/a><\/p>\n<h1><a id=\"6111\"><\/a>6.1.11: Before Sending Your Email<\/h1>\n<p>Before hitting the Send button, follow through on the entire writing process described throughout this textbook\u2019s Unit I, especially the Editing stage with its evaluation, revision, and proofreading sub-stages explored in (see <a href=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.library.torontomu.ca\/cmn279\/part\/chapter-5-the-writing-process-4-editing\/\">Ch. 5<\/a>). Put yourself in your reader\u2019s position and assess whether you\u2019ve achieved the purpose you set out to achieve in the first place. Evaluate also if you\u2019ve struck the appropriate tone and formality. If you\u2019re aware that your tone is too angry, for instance, cool down by focusing on other business for a while. When you come back to your email draft the next day, you will usually find that you don\u2019t feel as strongly about what you wrote the day before. Review the advice about netiquette in \u00a76.2, then replace the angry words with more carefully chosen expressions to craft a more mature response before hitting the Send button. You\u2019ll feel much better about this in the end than receiving the threat-heavy response your angry email would have prompted had you gone through with sending it.<\/p>\n<p>After revising generally, <strong>always proofread<\/strong> an email. In any professional situation, but especially in important ones related to gaining and keeping employment, any typo or error related to spelling, grammar, or punctuation can cost you dearly. A poorly written email is insulting because it effectively says to the recipient: \u201cYou weren\u2019t important enough for me to take the time to ensure that this email was properly written.\u201d Worse, poor writing can cause miscommunication if it places the burden of interpretation on the reader to figure out what the writer meant to say if that\u2019s not clear. If the recipient acts on misinterpretations, and others base their actions on that action, you can soon find that even small errors can have damaging ripple effects that infuriate everyone involved.<\/p>\n<h2>Table 6.1.11: Editing a Poorly Written Information Request Email<\/h2>\n<table style=\"width: 100%;border-collapse: collapse\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<th style=\"width: 50%\">Poorly Written Email Example<\/th>\n<th style=\"width: 50%\">Improved Email Draft<\/th>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 50%\">hey, think you made a mistake marking my last assinement i did what is supposed to do if its cuz i didnt get it in by the 5th its cuz i had a bad breakup it was so bad i had to see a councilor thats why i havnt bin around hope you understand. should of said that earlier maybe. oh and whens the next thing due. let me know as soon as u get this ok thanks bye<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 50%\">Hello, Professor Morgan:<\/p>\n<p>Could you please clarify why I failed the previous assignment?<\/p>\n<p>I believe I followed the instructions but may have been confused about the due date while dealing with some personal issues. If so, I apologize for my late submission and understand if that\u2019s the reason for the fail. I just wanted to confirm that that\u2019s the reason and whether there\u2019s anything I can do to make up for it.<\/p>\n<p>I assure you it won\u2019t happen again, and I\u2019ll pay closer attention to the syllabus deadlines from now on.<\/p>\n<p>Much appreciated,<\/p>\n<p>Taylor<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p>The poorly written draft has the look of a hastily and angrily written text to a \u201cfrenemy.\u201d An email to a superior, however, calls for a much more formal, tactful, courteous, and apologetic approach. The undifferentiated wall of text that omits or botches standard email parts such as opening and closing salutations is the first sign of trouble. The lack of capitalization, poor spelling (e.g.,<em> councilor<\/em> instead of <em>counsellor<\/em>), run-on sentences and lack of other punctuation such as apostrophes for contractions, as well as the inappropriate personal detail all suggest that the writer doesn\u2019t take their studies seriously enough to deserve any favours. Besides tacking on a question at the end, one that could be easily answered by reading the syllabus, the writer is ultimately unclear about what they want; if it\u2019s an explanation for why they failed, then they must be upfront about that. The rudeness of the closing is more likely to enrage the recipient than get them to deliver the requested information.<\/p>\n<p>The improved version stands a much better chance of a sympathetic response. It corrects the problems of the first draft starting with properly framing the message with expected formal email parts. It benefits from a more courteous tone in a message that frontloads a clear and polite request for information in the opening. The supporting detail in the message body and apologetic closing suggest that the student, despite their faults, is well aware of how to communicate like a professional to achieve a particular goal.<\/p>\n<p>After running such a quality-assurance check on your email, your final step before sending it should involve protecting yourself against losing it to a technical glitch. Get in the habit of copying your email message text (ctrl. + A, ctrl. + C) just before hitting the Send button, then checking your Sent folder immediately to confirm that the email sent properly. If your message vanished due to some random malfunction, as can happen occasionally, immediately open a blank MS Word or Notepad document and paste the text there (ctrl. + V) to save it. That way, you don\u2019t have to waste five minutes rewriting the entire message after you solve the connectivity issues or whatever else caused the glitch.<\/p>\n<p>For similar views on email best practices, see Guffey, Loewy, and Almonte (2016, pp. 90-97), which furnished some of the information given above.<\/p>\n<div class=\"textbox key-takeaways\">\n<h3>Key Takeaway<\/h3>\n<p>Follow standard conventions for writing each part of a professional or academic email, making strategic choices about the content and level of formality appropriate for the audience and occasion.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"textbox exercises\">\n<h3>Exercises<\/h3>\n<p>1. Take one of the worst emails you\u2019ve ever seen. It could be from a friend, colleague, family member, professional, or other.<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px\">i. Copy and paste it into a blank document, but change the name of its author and don\u2019t include their real email address (protect their confidentiality).<br \/>\nii. Use MS Word\u2019s Track Changes comment feature to identify as many organizational errors as you can.<br \/>\niii. Again using Track Changes, correct all of the stylistic and writing errors.<\/p>\n<p>2. Let\u2019s say you just graduated from your program and have been putting your name out there, applying to job postings, networking, and letting friends and colleagues know that you\u2019re on the job market. You get an out-of-the-blue email from someone named Dr. Emily Conway, the friend of a friend, who needs someone to put together some marketing brochures for her start-up medical clinic in time for a conference in a week. It\u2019s not entirely what you\u2019ve been training to do, but you\u2019ve done something like it for a course assignment once, and you need rent money, so you decide to accept the offer. Dr. Conway\u2019s email asks you five questions in the message body:<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px\">i. Our mutual friend mentioned you just graduated from college. What program? How\u2019d you do?<br \/>\nii. Can you send a sample of your marketing work?<br \/>\niii. How much would you charge for designing a double-sided 8\u00bdx11&#8243; tri-fold brochure?<br \/>\niv. When you\u2019ve completed your design, would you be okay with sending me the ready-to-print PDF and original Adobe Illustrator file?<br \/>\nv. If I already have all the text and pictures, how soon can you do this? Can you handle the printing as well?<\/p>\n<p>Dr. Conway closes her email asking if you\u2019d like to meet to discuss the opportunity in more detail and signs off as Emily. Draft a formal response email that abides by the conventions of a formal email.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\n<h2>References<\/h2>\n<p class=\"hangingindent\">Guffey, M., Loewy, D., &amp; Almonte, R. (2016). <em>Essentials of Business Communication<\/em> (8th Can. ed.). Toronto, Nelson.<\/p>\n<p class=\"hangingindent\">Khanna, K. (2017, March 25). 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