Your Turn!

Activity

Now that you have watched Video 3.1 and looked at our A-Level thesis statement, you are going to revise the thesis statement that you wrote in response to “Kids Around the World Just Want to Hang Out” in Chapter 2. Begin by writing two sentences that outline the strengths of your thesis. Follow this with two sentences explaining what you would like to improve in a second draft of this thesis. Using these reflections, return to your original thesis and rewrite the first and second storey. This is the second draft of your thesis statement.